Too bland
If your going to introduce something use a more distinguished beat with assorted instruments and a non-monotone beat
Too bland
If your going to introduce something use a more distinguished beat with assorted instruments and a non-monotone beat
I heard you has a sick beat!
Everyone has bowels of steel! Just not a sick beat.
For future reference make this song a bit longer and switch up the melody up a bit to make less repetitive.
Sounds more like "Cicada's Ballad"
Like what you did with the song. It's very simple yet relaxing, I don't think of this as a sad song but rather a videogame BGM or an ambient piece at a spa.
Thanks for the feedback, Shong1up! I haven't heard of 'Cicada's Ballad', I'll have to look that up.
-/\/\ugrunty
Pretty good
Wish the melody were faster and you traded some of the electronic sounds for electric guitars or drums
What have you done?
Made Clay Aiken sound like a legit artist
lol
Very Good but not Great
The strong start is to be commended, but the melody is should have hard hitting bass from 0:32-0:44 and 1:37-1:49. After that the melody becomes drowned out by electric guitar, you need to tune the electric guitar on the side to reveal the melody. However you did the song justice with a reminiscent Two-Mix finish 3:47-4:20.
Check out Anipara Club's "I love you! Project" cover. There is a good example of a strong bass performance.
Overall this isn't bad, but it could definitely be better
Too much gun cocking
its a shame that alot of people zero bombed you but this beat could be a legit video game bgm if you didn't add so many gun noises
yeah I was kinda experimenting some shit and added those gun sounds. btw, there aren't too many of them, they're just some kind of transition.
Is the full version coming out?
When most people fuse techno and classic together, it becomes a trainwreck. But I like where this is going, seeing how you patched this together I can tell this song pulls no punches.
But you said this is a demo, so I'll save the ten for the full version
Totally Wild but...
Just like everyone below me I would like to see a re-release of a looping version
Eh, someday XD Thanks.
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