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Allright! This pure genius!

I usually see people label jazz as a few saxophone notes mixed with piano.But this isn't one of those cases!
Love the fast tempo and the incorporation of cymbals. This song virtually needs no improvement; but strive for the 3 minute mark

Too bland

If your going to introduce something use a more distinguished beat with assorted instruments and a non-monotone beat

I heard you has a sick beat!

Everyone has bowels of steel! Just not a sick beat.
For future reference make this song a bit longer and switch up the melody up a bit to make less repetitive.

Sounds more like "Cicada's Ballad"

Like what you did with the song. It's very simple yet relaxing, I don't think of this as a sad song but rather a videogame BGM or an ambient piece at a spa.

Mugrunty responds:

Thanks for the feedback, Shong1up! I haven't heard of 'Cicada's Ballad', I'll have to look that up.

-/\/\ugrunty

Pretty good

Wish the melody were faster and you traded some of the electronic sounds for electric guitars or drums

What have you done?

Made Clay Aiken sound like a legit artist

LolHi responds:

lol

Very Good but not Great

The strong start is to be commended, but the melody is should have hard hitting bass from 0:32-0:44 and 1:37-1:49. After that the melody becomes drowned out by electric guitar, you need to tune the electric guitar on the side to reveal the melody. However you did the song justice with a reminiscent Two-Mix finish 3:47-4:20.

Check out Anipara Club's "I love you! Project" cover. There is a good example of a strong bass performance.

Overall this isn't bad, but it could definitely be better

Too much gun cocking

its a shame that alot of people zero bombed you but this beat could be a legit video game bgm if you didn't add so many gun noises

dx5231 responds:

yeah I was kinda experimenting some shit and added those gun sounds. btw, there aren't too many of them, they're just some kind of transition.

Is the full version coming out?

When most people fuse techno and classic together, it becomes a trainwreck. But I like where this is going, seeing how you patched this together I can tell this song pulls no punches.

But you said this is a demo, so I'll save the ten for the full version

Wait you know Envy?

Is Envy a man or woman?

Sun Hong @Shong1up

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Cherry Hill, NJ

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