Style is impetuous, Defense is impregnable...
From the strong start to the bass work throughout, it really captures the scenario of the Las Vegas boxer. I would offer criticism but there are no weak points to this song other than the suggestion of a looping version... You used everything from piano, trumpet, and xylophone and it shows you know what you are doing. This a landslide win. Tyson and D'Amato would be proud :D
Glad I did the theme justice in your eyes. Hit me up if you have any requests!
And LOL @ the Mike Tyson/Bison quotes :P
oooh that's dirty!
The lyrics is makes the song fun. Even the Control-Panel voices will do. Please release a version with lyrics and this song will be one of the best in the universe and all the other places too.
lol nah. \m/
Good for laughs
Though the vocals and beat is lackluster. The lyrics are so funny that its entertaining. This isn't rap its comedy.
Thanks. It's my first rap, so I figured I'd focus on the lyrics and what better way to do that than with a comedy song. You hit the nail on the head, myh friend lol
A force of nature
I can't criticize F-777 song because there its perfect. Everyone knows people try to make cover songs of F-777, ParagonX9 and EnV but their songs always fall short and lack a certain element. No matter how good they are they can never surpass the commanding feel of an original work from one of these guys.
Thank you F-777 for providing such great music.
Good execution, poor instrument choice
Though the song itself is very peaceful, the toy guitar strings used in the latter half of the song give it a cheap feel. Use Reason 4.0 to avoid that Fisher-Price sound.
Thanks, I'll be sure to check out Reason 4.0. As for the toy guitar... Its actually Harpsichord, and its the first time I've used it in a song.
-Shadow
You put your soul into into your music
As for the song, it runs velvet smooth. There are no abrupt sounds just a relaxing melody and bass beat to accompany with. I'm sold! The coordination and the use of the Reason 4.0 shines by the way the song resonates I forced to sit down and listen through. Excellent work! The only trifle I have is with the cheap skip/shuffle sounds at 2:07. But we all make mistakes.
I'm sorry to hear about your father, but I'm sure God is taking good care of him now. I can understand why you would want to express grievances especially through music. I don't know where I heard it but "They say music alters, moves and talks to you."
Thanks man. :) Gotta say "HOLD UP!" about the skip part and defend myself some though. :d It's meant to be a bit of a headfuck as it really warps the space in which you're listening, with a heavy amount of delay slowly building up in the right stereo. Was never meant to sound like a skipping record, just meant to skip braincells. :D
However, I never got a chance to listen to the track through a really nice system as my roomie was outta town while I was working on this, so maybe it's not as impressive in big sound as it is through my headphones/laptop speakers. :)
Thanks for your honesty and I appreciate the condolences. :)
Too Quiet
To be an ultimate showdown this song needs to have more energy. Pump up the bass, give it faster tempo and use some hard hitting sharp sounds and it would make a world of a difference
Not the best but I can see where its going
This needs a faster tempo, harder beat and more eardrum piercing bass.
omg thanks for giving me some feedback!! thank you!! =D
Good work but I was Luvstruck by the other one
compared to the Luvstruck 2008 this song has the same ingredients but not the same execution. The abrupt stops and the quick ascent to the bridge make it fall short of the previous submission
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