Shong1up's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

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Not the best but I can see where its going

This needs a faster tempo, harder beat and more eardrum piercing bass.

lackofintelligence responds:

omg thanks for giving me some feedback!! thank you!! =D

[~(BF)~ Freezing Rain]

Did you switch titles?

This sounds more like Palm Brinks and the other song you just submitted sounded more like Freezing Rain.

As for this song I like your execution but palm brinks is a more apt name for this submission.

SqueezyLemon responds:

Palm Brinks is the name for a town in the game Dark Cloud 2. The other song is a remix, this is an original, not to embarrase you, lol.

[reMix- DC2- Palm Brinks]

Sounds more like a rainy day than palm brinks

While this is good, try a variation of instruments if you want to go classic. Add some piano and make a supporting side melody

SqueezyLemon responds:

im bad at fl, so this is all i can produce at the moment...

[Running Away [dj-Smilee]]

Too Ambiguous

The middle loses its melody when you add the computerized noises the song isn't bold and needs a strong bass beat

dj-Smilee responds:

Ah, yes. The bridge. 'Tis my weakness! Maybe this is still a work in progress then. Thank you for your input. :)

[JP - Paparazzi (HCH) RMX]

Why did you touch the voice?

The normal voice would have been better than that high pitched chipmunk voice, please release a version where she sings normally!

joseepabloo responds:

i actually have a version of this song but is at 130 bpm you should check it out !! btw ty very much for your advice :D

[HUZZAH (Cave Story Remix)]

Awesome but short

C'mon giving us 1 min tracks is like giving some one half a snickers bar. I'm totally sold to music but I wish they were longer.

P.S. I'd like to see a SF2 Balrog's theme done by you

rtnario responds:

1) I did this a long time ago as a test song
2) I find it very difficult in putting content to lengthen songs XD

You should go check out Cave Story War. Or better yet, try looking for my Oppression remix called Core Oppression =) Thanks!

Oh, and I dunno about that...I don't do Street Fighter style remixes ^^;

[--Nightmare--]

Sucks harder than Pamela Anderson

Not that I hate the song, but I'm giving it a zero because there are other works more worthy of my stars. No hard feelings, no offense. I just believe there are sounds of fingernails screeching on chalkboard I'd rather listen to than this. :^)

OnyxMyr responds:

Real mature...why am I not surprised?
:P

[{MSX} Chaoz Tribute]

Hard To Fault

Because its perfect! I actually prefer your cover over the original.
I'd like to see you do a cover of EnV's Heaven-2

MSXOmega responds:

I'll keep that in mind!

[Guitar Vs. Piano 1.3 (Remix)]

Awesom

I know what I'm putting on my iPod!

zzbtbest1000zz responds:

Thanks for the 10
I'm glad you enjoyed

[CJO:Pick Up]

The song skips...

You aren't getting away with poor quality. I can hear the modem noises and audiojack plugging sounds, fix it then we'll see how the real song is supposed to go

ChrisOrosco responds:

Thanks for comment Shong. I appreciate the feedback.

The song is set under an ambient soundscape. These "poor quality" sounds you are talking about reference to the actual sounds of making a connection when I was younger. They were compressed and set through a filter resembling a old radio, but with a lot of decay on the reverb.

Its okay if you don't like it. ;)